Antigone Cadmus

All right, thanks :) Sorry, if I was rude before, but it was really bothering me lol No time to mess around, I thought as I dropped my hand like ...

First, I would like to thank you for not posting, like, fifty pages. This is a good length to review. First, the nit-picks: I sighed and turned up my iPod ...

This is good! I want to read more now :) Just a few grammatical errors: It was a painful process that lasted at least a couple of months to complete, ...

Agh, it's long! I a bit of it. I'll probably do a full critique later, but this little nit-pick really bothered me: In the Chana tribe there was girls and ...

I love the Gemma Doyle Trilogy ^^.

What a diabolical plan. colon parentheses!

Nice job. I few issues that I'll critique. 1. The story lacks description. The reader has no idea what the characters look like or where they are. In my head, ...

I'm not playwright, but here are my two cents: -It was a little cliche. This themes has been done many times. -I like how the girl left him in the ...

Hello! This is pretty good. Here is some critique... 1. I don't know if you mean it, but you spelt "secret" wrong in the title. You spelled it "seccret" :) ...

I wouldn't say selfish. I would just say that they have a survival instinct like all humans. That doesn't make them evil.

Um, ha ha? It's not all that funny... It took like ten seconds to understand. Maybe you have to be a guy... Oh well :)

It was good. A bit dry. You were obviously shooting for a Jane Austen-style kind of dialogue. ‘Yes, I know. Oh God. Fuck. That’s why I feel so messed up. ...

Harry Potter did single handily change the way people looked at Young Adult literature. Before, the genre was basically ignored. Different as they are, twilight could not exist without Harry ...

10/10 good quote :)

Phantom of the Opera, ha. imbored (seriously my friend's screen name)